What grade would this film essay be?

Hi, can I please get feedback on what grade this essay would be. I have made a lot of changes. Thanks

Question: Analyse how language features contributed to our understanding of a t

Kiā ora.
Lovely introduction. You have addressed the question well and the purpose is really clearly outlined.
From there it goes from strength to strength. the evidence used is well chosen and thoughtfully explained. It is all related back to the purpose and shows mature perception.
A great job - Well done.
JD :grinning:

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