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Describe a memorable idea in a written text you have studied.

Explain why the idea was memorable to teenagers

In the book They both die at the end, written by Adam Silvera a memorable idea was that no one should be afraid of death and this idea was shown through a series of events. A event that showed this memorable idea was when Mateo receives the dreading phone call from Death-Cast calling him that he was going to die today, another event that showed the memorable idea was when Mateo finally realised what he had finally done in his life after hanging out with Rufus… Through these events, Silvera showed an idea of how memorable it is for teenagers to live their lives without regret and despair and how no one should be afraid of death because having a fear of death can really set you back in life.

The fear of dying shouldn’t stop you from doing the things you want to do otherwise it will lead to regret and despair, teenagers are becoming so afraid of death they cant see beyond their video games. In the beginning of the book, Mateo got a phone call from Death-Cast informing him he is going to die today. He regrets it immediately “The number one person I’ll miss the most is Future Mateo, who maybe loosened up and lived” Mateo is already looking back at his life thinking about all the opportunities he missed out on. “Loosened up and lived” these words from Mateo particularly stood out to me as even he realised that there is so much to live to explore but his sadness and anxiety stopped him from doing all that. Mateo later on goes on to think about what his headstone should say. “What a waste of a life” “I have to do better, I have to honour this” Mateo realises he has still got time and wants to spend the rest of the day living in another version of himself. The repetition of “I have to” highlighted that Mateo is very eager to change the way he is living and enjoy himself on his last day which he couldn’t do all his life, Silvera has used the repetition to put an idea into the reader’s mind that when it comes to your death you get all the regrets so it’s better you live your life with a purpose from the start and not being afraid of death as having a fear could really set you back from doing the things you want to do such as exploring the world a thing Mateo couldn’t do as he just wanted the safety of his own bed. Silvera’s purpose is to show that we can live our lives with meaning and not think about regrets otherwise it could lead to regret and despair, Silvera has used Mateo’s character in this event to show how his fear of death has led to regret and despair because he was so afraid of trying new things as he wanted the safety of his own bed and staying home. This is so memorable to teenagers because teenagers are at a stage in life where they fall into bad habits and do not live life to the fullest, they are just staying at home and playing stupid video games and instead are not exploring the world which is way more helpful, it can also be linked to the real world because so many people are scared of trying new things eg. Sky diving and when they are in their death bed they are regretting the activities they didn’t do.

Throughout They Both Die at the End, Silvera encourages us to let go of our fears of death because it can lead to regret and despair. This idea is really memorable for teenagers as they can fall into bad habits and not get out as this will lead to regret and despair, we can see that in Mateo’s development. Mateo coming to terms with himself is one of the events that progresses this idea. In which this event he talks to himself about his change in mindset and how that’s allowed him to, after living in fear and now regret, finally let go of the fear of death and lived his life truly, honestly, and freely. “the most important goodbye is the one I said to Past Mateo, who I left behind at home …” “…Twelve hours ago I received a phone call telling me I’m going to die today, and I’m more alive now than I was then.”. This event lets the readers realise the growth and quality of life Mateo has gained from this experience. By him just deciding to live, Mateo has let go of his fear and regret, deciding to look forward, now finally happy with himself. The quote “Twelve hours ago I received a phone call telling me I’m going to die today, and I’m more alive now than I was then.”. Really puts the readers into perspective how much quality of life the readers would also gain if they would choose to actually live instead of fear as this would not lead to regret and despair. Even the fact that Mateo dies, in the end, gives the readers a sense of urgency of achieving this goal before they reach their end too because no one wants to live their lives in regret and this is what is happening in today’s society because everyone not just teenagers are so afraid of taking risks and when they lie in their death bed they are constantly regretting the things they didn’t do. Silvera has not used this event as a ‘happy ending’ like other wider literature as a fairytale ending, instead, Silvera has used this event to show how much better lives teenagers can live and it is so memorable because so many teenagers spend their lives enclosed in their homes, absorbed in video games and ignoring the wide world outside and by pointing out the enormous benefits that can be gained, by just exploring the world and going outside and making new friends can improve someone lives so much and Silvera has shown this through Mateo at first he was a soft depressed teenager and by deciding to explore the world with Rufus his life changed from bad to great. Because if Mateo can live more than his life in an entire day how much better of lives can teenagers hold? Silvera has therefore given teenagers and everyone a chance to come to terms with the reality that no one should fear death as it could lead to regret and despair which is shown by Mateo’s development throughout the book.

Overall the event of Mateo receiving the phone call and the event of Mateo realising what life is has shown me that there is so much to life and that we should enjoy it to the fullest rather than dwelling on our fears of dying. This idea is so memorable to teenagers as they are the ones with the fullest potential to do much better things with their life instead of staying home and playing video games which many teenagers are doing. Silvera skillfully illustrated this concept through Mateo’s growth as a character. Mateo went from beginning the book being terrified and apprehensive and not experiencing life to the fullest to realising what life is and being able to live it fully for a single time. Silvera’s purpose was to show that we can live our lives to the fullest and get the fear of death out of our minds as that could lead to regret and despair.

Kiā ora
Great intro - you set up both parts of the question well.
From there you tie it into the essay, use evidence like things that happen and quotes well.
You understand this well.
Good luck tomorrow. You have this under control.
Cheers
JD :grinning:

Is this an excellence?

Is this an excellence essay?
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Is this an excellence essay?

Is this an excellence essay?
Plssss responsd

If its not excellence can you plss give me any feedback? I really need excellence on this

Morena Rudy
It has what it needs for an E for this question. Make sure you go in to the exam today ready to not just repeat this essay but work what you know about the text into another one. Good luck
JD

can i pls get feedback and a grade on this
Question: Describe at least one character or individual in the text.
Explain how the character or individual helped you to understand an important message.

Book: They Both Die at the End
Author: Adam Silvera

In the book They both die at the end, written by Adam Silvera, an important message was that no one should be afraid of death, this was shown through Silvera use of Mateo’s character development throughout the film. It was shown through a series of events, an event that showed the important message was when Mateo receives the dreadful phone call from Deathcast. Another event that showed the important message was Mateo coming to terms with himself after hanging out with Rufus. Through these events Silvera helped me understand how noone should be afraid of Death because it can lead to regret and despair

The fear of dying shouldn’t stop you from doing the things you want to do. This is important because it shows how being afraid of death can cause regret and despair. In the beginning of the book Mateo receives a dreadful phone call from DeathCast, he instantly regrets it “ The number one person I’m going to miss is future Mateo, who maybe loosened up and lived”. Mateo is already looking back at his life, thinking about all the opportunities he missed out on. Because he was afraid of death, he was scared of trying new things and now that is causing him regret and despair. Silvera uses “ loosened up and lived” to show how mateo sadness and anxiety stopped him from doing the things he wanted to do and shows the amount of regret he has because of his fear of death. Mateo later goes on to think about what his headstone should say “what a waste of life, I have to do better, I have to honor this”, mateo is beginning to look forwards and is starting to realize how much of a better life he can live if he gets the fear of death out of his mind. SIlvera’s use of repetition of “I have to” really draws in the reader and makes them feel that they can do it too, they can have the same urgency that Mateo has and make their lives better. Silvera has used this event to show how much the readers can benefit from letting go the fear of death.This is especially important because society has made fear death at a stage where people just stay enclosed in their homes absorbed in video games and are not realizing the enormous benefits of going outside and exploring the world something mateo couldn’t do because he always wanted the safety of his own home. Aso how people are scared of trying new things eg. skydiving. Society has made death a thing to be afraid of but it is not, death is inevitable it is going to happen to everybody, so why can’t people just let go of the fear of death and live freely?.. Therefore Silvera has helped me understand how we should get the fear of death out of our minds because no one wants to be regretting the things they didn’t do when they are lying on their deathbeds, as that is the worst thing that can happen. It shows how us humans have a lot of potential to be doing great things without lives and not by living our life enclosed in our homes.

Throughout They Both Die at the End SIlvera encourages us to let go of the fear of death and I’ve honestly, happily and freely. This message is important because it demonstrates how much our lives can improve without having the fear of death constantly roaming around in our heads. Mateo coming to terms with himself is another event that progresses this message. Mateo finally realizes what he can do with his life without having the fear of death. “The important goodbye is the one I said to past Mateo. Twelve hours ago I received a phone call telling me I’m going to die today and I’m more alive now than I was then. This shows the growth and quality of life Mateo has just developed. By just deciding to live and explore the world with Rufus he has gained so much. Silvera uses “I’m more alive now than I was then” to show how much Mateo has changed, to show how much he benefited from just hanging out and exploring the world with Rufus. It makes the readers feel a want to also have this understanding. Because if Mateo can live his whole lifetime in one day, how much can the readers live? Silvera’s purpose is to show how much us humans can gain a lot from just living freely and exploring the world with or without a friend. And this is the problem with society, society is so into a world on the web everything is electronic. Because of this, people stay home and don’t socialize. People are so addicted to electronics that they don’t bother going outside and exploring the world without knowing the massive benefits that can be gained. People are so into social media that they do not care about themselves. They are not trying to improve themselves and are falling into other people’s traps. People can live their lives so well without the need of social media, because it causes people to stay at home and look at unwanted stuff, and are ignoring the benefits from going outside and exploring the world. If Mateo can go explore the world and make his life go from bad to great in a couple of hours without having the fear of death, then why can we not do that. Silvera has therefore given us a chance to come to terms with reality and has intended us humans to try and live a better life since we all live once, why can’t we live it to the fullest potential. Silvera has not used this event as a fairytale ending mateo and Rufus do not live “happily ever after” like other wider literature, Instead with Mateo and Rufus both dying gives the reader a urge to live their lives to the fullest potential by getting the fear of death out of their minds. Therefore Mateo has helped me understand how important it is that we get the fear of death out of our minds and by going that we can succeed in life. Because society opposes this message and it can cause regret and despair if we keep on living with the fear of death in our minds.

Silvera has therefore showed us how much better lives we can live without having the fear of death. Slvera skillfully illustrated this through Mateo’s character development. At first he was a soft depressed teenager and he became a fulfilled and happy teenager when he let go of the fear of death. Silvera also showed how society opposes this important message, with society not getting the fear of death out of their minds. Overall Silvera and Mateo helped me understand how having a fear of death can really set you back from doing the things you want to do.