Could you please provide feedback on my creative writing. This had already been marked, however I would like to receive some thoughts and suggestions for my writing for next time. Could you please tell me what grade you think I'm at too! :)

Hi Courtney
Welcome to the new look Studyit!

Really sorry, but I have deleted your portfolio piece as we cannot have internal assessment work posted on the site- due to authenticity issues!
Have a look at our guidelines for posting.

More than happy to assist with any work for the externals.

Hope we can help you later.