Looking for feedback on Analysing text essay: A thousand splendid suns

I am a level 2 student that is struggling in English and need some help on how to write/respond to one of the practice questions. I have written the introduction but I don’t know where to go from there.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oHunCVMl_0tlTtYPLWDBfD0Rk-uwu9onf13DPiRkxK0/edit?usp=sharing
can someone help me.

Hiya thomaskaldas112

I don’t seem to be able to access your link!

ET2