Kia ora Megan
This would be an excellence yes - you have addressed the question with depth, insight, and some lovely discussion of evidence, all while responding to the question throughout. What you have done particularly well though, is explore development of emotion across the film, which many do not really do at level one - great language of development used. There will usually be a techniques question in the exam, but the second bit can be quite varied like “reveals an idea” or “creates an impact” or “develops a character” - just make sure that you really adapt your material on the day for whatever the question is that you choose.
Very well done
Note on the thesis statement (and you probably know this but have just left it in) - you don’t need to actually write “thesis statement” - just open with the statement itself.